Is the fast decision is the key feature in leader person and taking very haste decision
Commanders have an enormous leverage on our society. They influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate their efforts because of their indelible impact on the world. Although some people hold the view point that leaders have to take decisions quickly. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion.
My personal and actual observation of life, have led me to the conclusion that boss should have deep thinking before take any decision. In the following essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the chief person should be wiser in taking any step related to his followers .Haste notion may effect negatively on his own country as well as the people and eventually will takes the community to catastrophic ends. For instance, the last decision for president Trump about government shutdown because that congress refuse to vote to agree for building the walls between USA and Mexico. This shutdown cause many federal workers to stay without wages for almost one month. This have a negative and a formidable effect on their lives and families. Apparently,I tmust be taken into account that faster decisions may hurt other people from many aspects as life standard and welfare.
Moreover, most hurry ideas and opinions lead to uncountable and undesirable results. Most fast decision ends wrongly and country’s leaders will have no time to correct these mistakes. For example, the leader of my country Iraq, Sadam Hussain, makes a quick decision to increase the price of the petroleum that exported from Iraq to west countries. He thought he makes the right decision to enhance the economy. The west countires make deals with other governments that their community exported the petroliunm and they gets better and afordablr prices than Iraq offers. This end with a big mistakes which lead to people of Iraq to suffer economically as petroleum is the most dependable country’s return. To correct this decision, it takes three years and hardly can return this country to its previous economic situation. In view of the fact that quick decision cause wrong result effect the country and the people who live their.
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... well as the people and eventually will takes the community to catastrophic ends. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12947658402 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59731261695 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589531680441 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2918038943 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198131931564 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532400639546 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649953342087 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106975530895 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033525992236 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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