Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
jobs have an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate the efforts to get secure job because of its indelible impact on our families life standard. Although some people hold the point of view that waiting for a comfortable jobs is the most important decision to been taken. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which has led me to agree with the idea that, guaranty jobs are more essential than waiting for another one that fulfill my dreams. In this essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, today competition are increased dramatically to get a decent jobs. These jobs with a good salary can affects us and our family life standers, welfare, and life quality. Moreover, it may never come the opportunity to get our dream's job, in turn, this will have a bad drawback on our family. My brother is a good complementing example of this, he get the chance to have job with high salary; regardless, he fill an application for another one which he desire and dream with but the competition for this job was high and it is not easy to get it. he sacrifice by his dream job in order to get job with excellent pecuniary income. Apparently, it must be taken into account that chance come once only and the smart person who exploited wisely.
In addition, as family come in priority, it is fundamental to accept and take the chance of afford job instead of waiting for one that may be never come. For instance, certain websites always offer many works with high salary. Although, I never found my dream job as dental assistant for fall time. I accept to take another job as cashier with full-time to fulfill my family need of their livings. In view of the fact that it is important to take opportunity right away when it is available because once it go, we may never reach it again.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, taken all factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea that it is crucial to take the chance and accept any acceptable jobs because of high competition on the available, high income works and to fulfill our family and ourselves simple life requirement.Accordingly, OI believe that getting a good and secure jobs should come in priority for each person especially who have family that responsible for their living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Jobs
jobs have an enormous leverage on our quotid...
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
...erage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...luence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
... of view that waiting for a comfortable jobs is the most important decision to been ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e into the most outstanding reasons. To commence with, today competition are ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...jobs. These jobs with a good salary can affects us and our family life standers, welfar...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... good complementing example of this, he get the chance to have job with high salary...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...mple of this, he get the chance to have job with high salary; regardless, he fill a...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fills'.
Suggestion: fills
...ve job with high salary; regardless, he fill an application for another one which he...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'desires'.
Suggestion: desires
...an application for another one which he desire and dream with but the competition for ...
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Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sacrifices'.
Suggestion: sacrifices
...s high and it is not easy to get it. he sacrifice by his dream job in order to get job wi...
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Suggestion:
...the smart person who exploited wisely. In addition, as family come in priorit...
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Suggestion:
...amental to accept and take the chance of afford job instead of waiting for one th...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...o accept and take the chance of afford job instead of waiting for one that may be ...
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... it go, we may never reach it again. To sum up, after contemplating the reaso...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Accordingly
...y and ourselves simple life requirement.Accordingly, OI believe that getting a good and sec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73831775701 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75904407729 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502336448598 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.7310116566 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.736842105 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5263157895 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295873269584 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909159407662 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486407526781 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186176981068 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284901542454 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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