Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
freedom has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influences in a direct and intangible way. It has an indelible impact on person's ideology, preference, and life patterns. although some people hold the viewpoint that liberty was more available for youth in the past than these days. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal experience and actual observation of life which has led me to agree with the idea that orders today are more flexible than before. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To begin with, todays young people have more freedom to express their opinion. Social media and internet play a pivotal roles to give space for them to comments, like, or dislike any social activities that take place in our society. furthermore, they can make groups to lead some notion as opponents or proponents for certain cases. for instance, many of the adolescents are against the last President Trump's decision to build the wall that separate the USA from South america to stop the immigrants. Many young people works against this decision and make a page on the social media to collect sounds. They were a strong weapon against this thought and it did works. In view of the fact that in the past young people had never the chance to lead such a group and express their ideas against the president o of their country.
In addition, they have the right to choose their own path in their life. They can leave their parents house and makes their own decision about their study, friends, and careeroo. My own daughter is a good example of this, when she turn 19 years old, she makes her own decision without keeps in mind my and her father wishes to go to medical school, she choose to attend dancing school. Later, she succeed in her career and go to Hollywood to follow her dreams. This further ephasizes the point that when I was in her age I followed my parents wishes and never had the chance to take this step.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, taking all factors into consideration, I would reinforce my idea that young people are enjoy unrestraint rules today than in the previous years because they have more freedom to express their opinion and t follow their dreams in their future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78765432099 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39097780874 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9793514003 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.95 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119671464739 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362923012084 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414783812683 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792037006109 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291408514799 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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