The most important education occurs not during adult hood but during childhood\ Agree or not agree
“Education during childhood as carving on stone.” someone said. Learning play an important role in our lives enhancement because well-educated person can improve his life standard, welfare, and quality. Some people think that every person has the ability to seek education no matter what his age. This is an absolute true. But how much we can keep these information? This obviously depend on many factors and one of these crusial factors is the age. In this essay, I will put forward a substantiated personal view that argues that learning in early age more important than in late age for several reasons.
To begin with, the ability to retain information is more in childhood and faster than elderly age. This is a fact and all researches and study prove it. We can easily tell that young people and more specific the children have the ability to learn faster than adult people. According to certain study they also prove that 4 years age can know how to solve some simple mathematic problems and in a faster manner which is impressive to their small brain. On the other hands, the old people take more time to complete the same task. Furthermore, when the same tasks repeated again after one week the result was the same for the older people but was fasinnating for children which finish these question faster than the first time. We can conclude from this experiment that the children can learn faster and retain these information than adult people.
In addition, children can recall information easily, the old and the new one. While the old people can mostly recall the old information better than new ones. This improved by many medical scientists. For instance, my father try to learn how to use computer when it is first invented. He ask private teacher that come to home once a week to teach him. After 6 months later my father learn successfully how to use it but later, after year back he cannot even remember how to shut down the computer. He ask my brother, 9 years old, at that time to help him. Because my brother was attending these classes with my father he can easily shut it down.
AIn conclusion, I strongly agree with the statement that young age educated more important than adult because they have the ability to learn easily and can recall all information they need faster than adult people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79900744417 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46896642014 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506203473945 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3884337806 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0869565217 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5217391304 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100749835145 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270011170711 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492509263025 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076404569638 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605229617983 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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