Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Society can be defined as a group of people who share location, follow same traditions, and speak with the same language. As the time goes by, societies, not except from other life aspects, has been drastically changed which result in updating and providing the rules and regulations for such a sophisticated world. I think through these transitions, the rules become so strict especially for young adults. New restrictions in the name of safety to prevent future failure and putting younger's adult life under microscope as a result of proliferation of social media are two main constraints that a juvenile should deal with.

Nowadays, it seems that there are some unwritten rules that a young child should follow to be successful in the future. Needless to say that most parents put pressure on their child to study hard to get admission from a "well-known" university to "increase" their chance for their future job. Although these sequence of actions may result in finding a job which considered as a so-called "success", however, we have to look closer at the explanation of success. I totally agree with Albert’s definition “Success is not the key to happiness, happiness is the key to success. If you love what you are doing, you will be successful.” But I cannot see any relation between this definition of happiness and the aforementioned path that parents provide for their child to achieve success. It goes without saying that most of today’s graduate students just target popular universities and major, regardless of their own interest.

It is true that social media and new technology make people closer to each other, Nevertheless, it seems that all people around the world are watching us! There are no specific rules for such technology despite their claim about privacy policy. In such a case, young people are more vulnerable to be influenced by society compared to adults; they are still at the beginning of their adulthood journey. I remember around two years ago, my friends and I went to a bar to relax after a heavy load semester. Bob, one of my friend, drank a lot like there is no future. He made fun of our university’s principal by mimicking his speech. No one knew that the video tape that supposed to be a fun memory to ourselves, became viral. After this disaster, wherever he went university staff looked at him like he was a murderer and he felt that he is left out. Although he apologized to our principal later, we all learn a lesson; society is not as kind as our friendship group.

To sum up, society, even the parents, put more restriction on young people’s life. The designed one way of success without considering children’s talent and happiness, and observing every single movement and judgment of society, are two main reasons for such a condition.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ild to study hard to get admission from a 'well-known' university to &a...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, i think, as a result, it is true, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0611814346 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16490012204 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1846720791 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.95 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123740199243 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039246305997 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422025669724 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746591415747 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287635253076 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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