Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Social activity like sports and arts have tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. They influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate them because of their indelible impact on the society.
Although some people hold the viewpoint that governments should support one rather other especially arts because it has in intimate contact to our emotions. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal and actual life observation which has led me to agree with the idea that it is literally important to provide a finiacial support for sport.In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, sport especially Olympic ones could return money to the state and use it in more beneficial and essential matter. For instance, in my back home, the goverment spends every year myriad of money on football games,by contract with the most famous coatch, good players to teach the citizen players how to use tactic to win the games and soon. Later, when the local team play against each other, the winnner team gets a finanacial gifts, furthermore, each player have a free trip to visit one of the most famous country in football. eventually, all these encouraging gifts are inorder to ameliorate the teams leve in playing to win the Olympic one. Apparently, this will bring return money to their own country as they will enhance the reputation as asuuporative country for sports and can use these money in building the economy, enhance health, and other society fields.
In addition, this will reinforce people to devote their time by taking care of their health and practice sports on daily bases. Hence the governments will spend more money in this field, people can practice sports more easily because of plethora of sports centers. Especially, if they made special discount for older people. As all knows that when a person get older, his health needs more attention. This couldbe easily provided if they practice sports and could be further easier if done with plenty of recreation centers that build by the governemnet all over the states. In view of the fact that the governemnets will reduce the health problems for those people and all will live happily.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons that I mentionrd before, taking all the factors into consideration, I would reinforce my idea that finicial support to the ethletics and sports are more important than arts because it will gets bebnfit to the country finicially and enhance the people health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06103286385 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5506787765 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5167063393 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168464967915 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493890668023 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517890042049 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927958190448 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566737198123 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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