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题目原文：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
History has tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate it's indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that studying history may distract our major study and effects overall our grades. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal and actual life observation which has led me to agree with the idea that history is an essential for our nation's identity and ourselves brilliant future. In the following essay, I shall delve into must outstanding reasons.
To commence with, history represent our culture and each person should had access to it. Without knowing past information about our ancestors, each person should value his culture and understand how his grand grand fathers live. All this could not be done without knowing history. For instance, many museums all over the world still to our days open the doors to thousands of visitors to search and understand the culture of our ancestors because without persons history , he have no future.
In addition, it helping in build and ameliorate our future knowledgeable skills. All scientists and researchers depends on previous experience to enhance the future of our lifestyle, quality, and life stander. For example, Roenteogon, the science who discover the X-ray, he build his knowledge on others historical mistakes by other scientists. Many of them before Roenteogon, try their best to discover helpful method in early diagnosos of certain diseases, some felt and others get some beneficial results. Roenteogn, collect all these information and work harder on them to com up with this sagnificat discovery that are so helpful till our days.Apparently, it must be taken into account that the previous acquaintance of history, help others to discover new ways in our contemporary future.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I would like to reinfroce my idea that history play a pivotal role in our future and it must for all type of study because it represent our culture and helps in building our information on previous historical ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ncestors because without persons history , he have no future. In addition, it h...
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...rs because without persons history , he have no future. In addition, it helping i...
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...eficial results. Roenteogn, collect all these information and work harder on them to com up with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23398328691 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78215072459 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58217270195 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2272967501 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110652963315 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037839603806 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282762515255 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744439357671 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223091674257 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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