Some organization integrates employees in decision MAKING PROCESS OF THEIR GOODS AND SERVICES. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DRAWBACKS OF THIS.
Choosing to elaborate in some works for special organizations it is not that easy decision. In fact, we should keep in mind some important points to take in consideration before take this decision. Like, how the team works, the comfortable in the work atmosphere, and the cooperativeness between the team. Although some coworkers prefer not to be involved in any decision related to the organization works. In contrast, they want to do what tasks have been supplied to them only. While, others prefer to be part of the organization’s decision according to the process of making their goods and provides services. In this essay, I will put forward a substantiated personal view that argues this process have pros and cons in many different faces.
To commence with, the advantages of collaborate in making decision is sharing ideas between team works to get benefit backs for the organization as a whole. Moreover, each person ideas will be valuable in putting forwards the marketing of this organization services. For instance, the Michel Cores, company makes purses for ladies; make a survey to conduct their coworker’s opinion in their goods and the result was impressive to the owner. Many ladies give her point of view in some goods as it is not practical to use and holds especially during work time and shopping. The owner takes their views and uses it in making a new brand that have a better quality. The marketing for this new brand although it is high price is so impressive. As you can see, the cooperation between workers team elevate the marketing for their organization which works for.
In contrast, this view has its drawbacks too. The decision for same example above can be effected by personal view without taking in considerations other women opinion. Like for example, some women not interest about how this good is practical more than its fashions and beautiful design. For same example, my young daughter prefer one of these purses which is semi- heavy in weight and small in size that even cannot put her IPhone in it.These coworker’s opinion not take in consideration the desire of some customers as my daughter on example of it.
To sum up, considering aforementioned advantages and disadvantages of sharing the coworkers in decision making for their organization which works for, I recommend these organization not only take opinions of their workers but also make survey every certain periods about the quality of their goods and services to keep them up to date and gain acceptance of all people desire.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89843809598 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51179245283 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1982849503 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320769297969 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102451595716 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750030290207 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207097762336 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648882578514 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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