agree or disagree
the franchise is better than small business
In this set of materials, the reading and the lecture both discuss whether or not the franchise business are more preferable than small independent one. While the reading sates that many problems faces the people who own their small business, franchise will guarantee the success of this work without any risky issues. The lecture refutes this by saying that franchise have many questionable issue and opposes each and every reasons that supported the claims of the writer.
First and foremost, the reading claims that the small business owner hard to find a good suppliers of goods and services they need for their work while, the franchise provide them and reduce the losses for the owner. However, the lecture argues that franchise owner enforced to buy expensive goods. According to the professor, the goods even if considerably equivalent to the ones that the company force the owner to buy them, they are not allowed to get these goods and this is disadvantage of the franchise.
Secondly, the reading makes the argument that the owner will not lose extra money spent on advertisement because the mother company will pay for it. As all know, the ad is very important and critical in business. On the other hand, the reading counters this by saying that 6% of total sale will go to advertisement. Furthermore, the return of money will spend to this ad. Also, the advertisement will ad about the brand of the company not the younger business.
Lastly, the reading says that franchise are more safe from failure than independent business. While, the lecture refutes this by pointing out that the security are not provided by franchise. Is it true reduce the risk but the gain from small business are double than the franchise work and researcher prove that all exist small business that are bought from previous owner have a n enormous success and secure finance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...he reading and the lecture both discuss whether or not the franchise business are more prefera...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'supplier'?
Suggestion: supplier
...mall business owner hard to find a good suppliers of goods and services they need for the...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...from failure than independent business. While, the lecture refutes this by pointing o...
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Line 7, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ness that are bought from previous owner have a n enormous success and secure fin...
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Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...at are bought from previous owner have a n enormous success and secure finance. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9619047619 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50450639452 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501587301587 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7599172107 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194614660937 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684096144138 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872271965468 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133070479679 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944291022071 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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