Being honest is one of the most important things that people need to vote for to choose a leader for a group or organization use specific reasons and examples
A leader can be any individual whose characteristics and qualities people admire and try to emulate. When people want to vote for their leader, they should keep in their mind that this person has the authority to lead their destiny either to positive or negative endings. Consequently, the people have to make their good choice. I personally believe honest is one of the most important characteristics that should be present in leader’s personality for several reasons.
To begin with, honest person is trustful and works for group benefit not her own self. However, this is not the only positivity characteristics regard to be available in his personality. But it’s one of the most pivotal things. For instance, when I was study for my national board dental exam, I had join one messenger group which his leader select the most enthusiastic persons. He did his best to ask all the people who already take the test for reminder questions in their test and we solve them in our groups until each one finish his test successfully. All trust him that he is the boss and will never let us down. I was the last one who take the test and nevertheless, I was 3 months behind, he keeps send me more questions and helps me solve doubt ones despites he be wrapped up most of the time. His words” I will be for all until each one of my team finish his test successfully.” This illustrates that leader always work for all in spites of, his occupied time.
In addition, whenever person be honest, he will conformist to put his speech in action. If he promisebefore became a leader to do some changes in organization rules like increase workers wages, take a day vacation each 6 months, etc. He should keeps his words after been voted as a leader. My father is a good example of this, He is lawyer with long experience in his field. Although this type of work needs you to be tricky person which in some lawyers consideration is to be un honest. My father wasn’t of this type. Besides his honesty, he is a famous and successful lawyer. This charectreristics let him to be voted as aleader for lawyer association in Iraq. During his formal speech he mentioned to do many achievments to the association. He kept his words.Later after 8 years as leader for this association all other voted leader follow his way to be successful as him.
In sum, to be a leadership is an honors to yourself and your society and to be a good leader you should have many moral value which honesty is one of them because the person with this ethics will be trustful and keep his promises for group benfits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d helps me solve doubt ones despites he be wrapped up most of the time. His words&...
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...ion. If he promisebefore became a leader to do some changes in organization rules...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'keep'
Suggestion: keep
... vacation each 6 months, etc. He should keeps his words after been voted as a leader....
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... months, etc. He should keeps his words after been voted as a leader. My father is a good...
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...r been voted as a leader. My father is a good example of this, He is lawyer with ...
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...wyer with long experience in his field. Although this type of work needs you to be trick...
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...s to the association. He kept his words.Later after 8 years as leader for this associ...
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... as him. In sum, to be a leadership is an honors to yourself and your society and to be ...
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...urself and your society and to be a good leader you should have many moral value ...
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... is one of them because the person with this ethics will be trustful and keep his pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6399132321 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82855189321 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505422993492 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6580576014 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304822308008 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954316062727 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693274856917 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201845602539 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375342013072 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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