Consider a situation where you asked by your supervisor to participate in a group project at work. Your supervisor wants you to work with someone who has opinion who has a very different from yours. Moreover they feel very strongly about these opinions. Do you think this is a good idea? Use your reasons to support your answers.
Group works has a great influence in over all the result of any project. If we take in considerations that this group is working in a team spirit, otherwise, the result will come negatively. The question is, is it a good idea to work with someone who hasn’t has any democratic view with his coworker. Besides, he get a strongly support the supervisor? I personally think it’s a bad idea to be a participant in such project for many reasons.
First of all, in such a situation, no freedom in opinion exchange between me and my peer. As he will be insist on his opinion and never take mine even if my one have the right direction which will help in built our project to right path. We can understand this situation more clearly according to what happen to my brother when he had to finish project with one of his peer in economic company specialized in selling a trade clothes marks. His friend’s idea was strongly supported by his supervisor and never takes my brother ideas in consideration but this have a negative impact on the company and cost the company a lot of many as their marketing for these clothes failed to reach the expected result. We can tell many opinions and idea should be taken in consideration to prevent a dramatics result.
In addition, the end decision will be to this person side and I should follow him no matter if I have a different perspectives . This in my opinion will delete my personality not only in such a project but also in future as I will always hesitate to express my opinion thinking I will end with a bad decision and harm me psychology.
In sum, I personally feel it’s a bad idea to work in project with person get supported for his idea from our supervisor as he always believe that he has the right decision and not accept to listen in my opinion and this will effect on my decision in any future projects as I will feel not sure about my opinion anymore. I feel it’s better to keep our opinions shared and respected by all members in the group and the supervisors should always give equal opportunities for all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...tic view with his coworker. Besides, he get a strongly support the supervisor? I pe...
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Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('strongly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('support') instead of another adjective.
...view with his coworker. Besides, he get a strongly support the supervisor? I personally think it&a...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'perspective'?
Suggestion: perspective
...low him no matter if I have a different perspectives . This in my opinion will delete my per...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...atter if I have a different perspectives . This in my opinion will delete my perso...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...s idea from our supervisor as he always believe that he has the right decision and not ...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...t to listen in my opinion and this will effect on my decision in any future projects a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, i feel, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53580901857 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71313547624 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472148541114 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8910773683 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161583100665 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669258956446 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419412941394 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116487542818 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629360251682 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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