Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Agree or disagree?
Education is the nutritional calorie for our soul. Its play a pivotal role in our life style, carrier, and welfare of human beings. Parents have a big role in our education process either in the past or in these days. Although some people believe guardian are more involved in their children’s education in the past than now a days. I personally believe in these days our parents are more involve for many reasons.
To begin with, parents education, level of understanding, and knowledge in different fieldsare more than in the past. Before our grand fathers didn’t complete their higher education. Actually there was even no shools to be attended in their era. Eventually their prospective is limited to some simple life problems which in turn, can’t keep attention to their children education, since; have nothing to help with. My grand father is a good example of this, in his days no school is not advent yet. Although he teach himself by himself, until he can solve simple mathematic process and read Holly Quran”muslim’s book”.When one his daughter which is so smart try to do her homework he can’t help, not because he don’t want to do but because he can’t do it.This is all belong to his narrow education knowledge.
In addition, life difficulties are more shift from worse to worst. One of these difficulties job apportunities are reduced dramatically and competition depend on who is had more higher educational degree. As our parents have a wide experience in their lives. They understand that It’s important to get our higher degree to enjoy our life with less burden. Our guardian take a big role in motivate us to increase our productivity and education level. For instance my mother was keep tell me everyday story about how dark future I will have if not study hard and she was try to help me in my homework everday to get high grades in my school and in turn, a good educational level and adecent job.
In conclusion, although some people belive parents ion the past are involve in their children education than todays. I personal feel its vers versa as our parent’s procpective become wider and they seek a good job to overcome life difficulties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ldren's education in the past than now a days. I personally believe in these days our...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...n's education in the past than now a days. I personally believe in these days our...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'teaches'.
Suggestion: teaches
...o school is not advent yet. Although he teach himself by himself, until he can solve ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...lly Quran'muslim's book'.When one his daughter which is so smart try ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...t to do but because he can't do it.This is all belong to his narrow education k...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...ly and competition depend on who is had more higher educational degree. As our parents have...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is had more higher educational degree. As our parents have a wide experience in t...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
... people belive parents ion the past are involve in their children education than todays...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97587131367 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99231262362 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54691689008 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.196176219 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6842105263 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32589298857 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114658585691 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105918986748 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236797803982 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855923924452 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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