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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, due to impvements of technology and increase in human population leading to enhance in their needs, various companies developed producing textile products. The competition between companies offering similar product, made the role advertisement significant. however, are they showing us the real products or it is just a pleasant illusion to enhance their sales? In my point of view, most advertisements over-compliment their products to attract more costumers, mainly for the following reasons.

first of all, people believe what they see. look of the product is the first aspect people face, therefore many companies are just working on the look of their products instead of the quality in order to sell more. it happened to me many times, as a month ago, I watched an advertisement video about a backpack that showed the features of a backpack and made me decide to purchase that procuts, because of enough space it had, also the light weight of that. however, when I delivered that backpack, the quality was such a disaster that I the backpack ripped off with the first use.

Moreover, not every body can examine the quality of the product before purchasing it, as happened to me, the advertisement are the only impressions we get that make us decide whether to buy it or not.

On the other hand, if a company decides to be sincere with the costumers and also show them the cones of their product beside the pros, other competing companies will not. So the costumer will buy the product with no cones, instead of the sincere producting and the deceptive company will simply wrest the market of sincere company. Obviously, it is not desireable for any company.

Taking all these factors into account, if we want to receive sincere advertisements, all the companies should work on this together and also there should be organizations to evaluate their honesty. Otherwise, companies will just compete in the much lies they can make people believe instead of working on the quality of their products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ade the role advertisement significant. however, are they showing us the real products ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...inly for the following reasons. first of all, people believe what they see. l...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Look
...t of all, people believe what they see. look of the product is the first aspect peop...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d of the quality in order to sell more. it happened to me many times, as a month a...
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Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: LIGHT_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lightweight'?
Suggestion: lightweight
...ecause of enough space it had, also the light weight of that. however, when I delivered that...
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Line 7, column 459, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... it had, also the light weight of that. however, when I delivered that backpack, the qu...
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Line 25, column 245, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ise, companies will just compete in the much lies they can make people believe inste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09552238806 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77297848316 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540298507463 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2460381324 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.928571429 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122499048794 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467486400373 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320786444156 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690456556984 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200908821572 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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