There are many different jobs. Some are part time jobs and some are full time jobs. Jobs have various things other than money. Personally, I believe that money is not the most vital thing of a job. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, I think that respect is one of the most important things a person should acquire in his life. Being respected in your workplace plays a very big role in how people communicate with you. Not being respected downgrades you in your work area and people would not give you a place there. You will feel terrible and uncomfortable. At this point, money would not matter to you as much as getting the respect you want. My personal experience illustrates this argument, I used to work at KFC during the summer and I was not given much respect because of my age and my size. My work mates would walk around telling me offensive things and I could not do anything except ignore as I would get fired if I replied. Money did not play a crucial part in my life during that time. I did not care about how much I got and all i wanted was to attain the respect I deserved at that place. As a result, no amount of money kept me working there and I quit after a few time .
Secondly, some people work stuff that they do not really know about and like just for the sake of money. This would not make them happy and comfortable working and might say some rude words to other employees and hurt them just because they do not like what they are doing. As a result, problems could occur between employees and affect the way the work is going and result in some losses as well. Also, this could lead to losing customers if the employee's communication was poor due to his bad mental health as he is not pleasant in his work. For instance, my cousin once worked as a receptionist because she needed money but she studied electrical engineering in university. Accordingly, being a receptionist was not her thing and she ended up giving away the company's best customers. She could not develop any social relationships there as she was feeling uncomfortable and annoyed all the time doing something that was not for her which is one of the needed to things to increase the company's profits. She ended up leaving the job and went and worked as an electrical engineer with a less salary but the difference in the salaries that she lost actually bought her the happiness she wanted.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that money is not the most important thing of job. This is because that I believe that attaining the respect you deserve, and mastering your job with what you learned are vital to keep you in this job no matter what your salary is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43113772455 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40246972179 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463073852295 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7596314894 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.04 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184522519668 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586083849929 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526709402216 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140256906865 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066921240704 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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