Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important problems affecting our society (or the most important problems in today's
world) today could be solved within our lifetime.
It goes without saying that in a such sophisticated world where all the realms of knowledge are expanding dramatically, universal obstacles due date has turned to a controversial issue. In this line of though some people believe that these problems can be solved within our life time, while others hold the opposite opinion, stating that it would take even a milleniua form human beijg to resolve these phenomenas. I personally concur with the latter group due to a couple of plausible reasons which I will elaborate in subsequent paragraphs.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that the contemporary technology is not advanced enough to overcome some of these issues. In the other words, some problems like the air pollution or scarcity of water cannot be solved with current knowledge and it may take over a hundarade years to invent a equipment which has the ability of producing more water in the desserts or refine the air. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by the online articles. Weeks ago, I have read an essay about the process of inventing future absolute treatment for some severe desieases like as brain cancer. The essayist claimed that current results of the experiments are not satisfying because they need a atomic robot to prop the brain cells in order to find the reason, and then they can cure it. As a result they need to do enormous external researches on such patent achive a acceptable result.
Another equally important point corroborating my stance is that some problems stems from cultural gaps. In fact it may take few generations to change the underlying beliefs of the society. Drawing from my grandmother’s experience, whenever she talks about her childhood I see how some beliefs has transferred over these years. For example The hygiene situation was drastically poor in that time and people used to believe that there is a troll called “All” who eats the new born babies and their mother. However, over several decades,this myth is completely erased from public’s unconscious memory, because the more got people informed about science , the more they become aware.
To sum up, taking all aforementioned reasons and point into account, one can rationally conclude that the 21 centary human being is in need a long time to overcome it’s issues and obtacles. This is because not only the technological equipments are advance enough, but also the cultural misunderstandings need prolonged fundamental developments on generations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86054646616 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5150880642 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.1875 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918325704545 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257438734978 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03797012377 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522429985011 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341349361672 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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