Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
There are many forms of entertainment that affect society. Some people argue that individuals' behaviors are influenced by movies and television. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with such notion. I believe that films today provide a plethora of role-models to society. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, movies and TV shows provide individuals with many positive role-models. Although most people normally watch movies and shows for enjoyment, the majority of wholesome shows teach people to be gentle through heroic characters. Moreover, many movies illustrate people about the consequences of illegal actions. For instance, the story of Star Wars, an American epic science fiction movie, teaches many people around the world about beneficence. There are many heroic people who persist all villains and protect the cities. Therefore, most adults and children who watch Star Wars will be spontaneously persuaded to be moral and gracious.
Secondly, another fact that supports my standpoint is that the majority of TV shows teach people different experiences and knowledge. Movies and shows not only provide epic stories to people, but they also provide beneficial information to broaden our's knowledge horizon. I can attest to this from my own experience; since I was an adolescent, I watch a large number of sci-fi movies. Thus, more than enjoyment, I learned many scientific facts that I can apply to my education at school. Furthermore, an amount of knowledge, such as physics and chemicals also benefit to my professional practice.
In conclusion, I firmly maintain the belief that people are also influenced by movies and shows. This is due to the fact that individuals are affected by role-models in the shows, and watching movies also provides people a lot of beneficial knowledge and information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nce; since I was an adolescent, I watch a large number of sci-fi movies. Thus, more than enjoymen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35880398671 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91483891715 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2508034788 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14042678986 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049530165512 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462132190421 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949706533765 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409952138634 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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