Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I don't agree with this statement. I think that movies and TV have a positive influence on the behavior of young people. As a cultural communication tool with a large information capacity, film and television can transmit information and different cultures with high effciency. For example, films from different regions often have distinct regional characteristics and culturak backgrounds. For example, the classic film War and Peace profoundly reveals the history of Russia, with distinct Russian style. Another example is the Chinese documentary Taste of the Human World, whch is a very comprehensive introduction of Chinese food culture. With the improvement of film rating system and TV censorship system, there will less and less bad information in films and TV which may be affect behavior of yong people. As we all know, the United States has a very strict film rating systems, and China also has a fairly sound televesion censorship system. These measures are very effective in filtering out bad information in the media and reducing the possible impact on yound people to a very low possibility. Moreover, as a popular social media, I think movies and tv are taking on more and more active social responsibilities. More television and film works that shows human kindness and social justice are emerging, and more films and television works that expose the dark side of society are leading us to lash out at the dark side. Showing the dark side is not to guide young poeople to imitate, but to cheers young people can treat the world with a more optimistic andpositive attitude. Therefore, I have full confidence in the future of film and television works. With the progress of science and technology and the development of open cultural atmosphere in the future, film and television works will play a more important role in the society. I believe that movies and TV have a positive influence on young people's behavior and will be more positive in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03987730061 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86103589025 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51226993865 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4758231887 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199323700412 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757090852035 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559177462114 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199323700412 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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