Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important ways to improve the people s health is to clean the environment Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The most important ways to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As peoples daily life have improved rapidly. Beside the develop, the new technology had threatened environment , so hurt peoples health.More people argue that we should clean the environment in order to improve peoples health. I argee with that opinion, heres are my reason.
Clean the environment means to control the wasty industry not to pollute the air, water and food , so it can make people more health. Health is the basic life factor to people. There is a saying that : body is the capital of revolution. Also our health can help us to do more to protect the environment. For example, America used to polluted the environment so people in there usually be sick and fall ill. Now America evalue the importance of peoples health, so control the pollution to the environment, the living standard improved .people also become more health than before. Country develop more rapidly.
The most important way to improve peoples health is to clean environment. because environment like a friend to human. We lived on it , life depends on it. when environment become bad ,our health also be threated. Such as food,living standard, water and so on, we gain them from environment. Onec we ignore environment we will pay the price. so we need to clean environment to improve the peoples health.
Admittedly, i am not saying that clean the environment is the best way to improve peoples health. But improve our medical technology can help us with exactly mechans to judge our body .And let us know more about our body. But clean the environment can't do that. however, know more about yourself seems not a good choice. It may let you lose your life confidence if you know you gonna die. so , clean the environment seems the most important way to improve our health.
Concerning all the details mentioned above, we can conclude that the environment cleaner is really the most important way to improve our health.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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As peoples daily life have improved rapidl...
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...aily life have improved rapidly. Beside the develop, the new technology had threatened envi...
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...ed environment , so hurt peoples health.More people argue that we should clean the e...
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...y not to pollute the air, water and food , so it can make people more health. Heal...
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...at : body is the capital of revolution. Also our health can help us to do more to pr...
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...t like a friend to human. We lived on it , life depends on it. when environment be...
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...pends on it. when environment become bad ,our health also be threated. Such as foo...
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...lth. But improve our medical technology can help us with exactly mechans to judg...
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...s with exactly mechans to judge our body .And let us know more about our body. Bu...
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...with exactly mechans to judge our body .And let us know more about our body. But c...
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...ut our body. But clean the environment cant do that. however, know more about yours...
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...confidence if you know you gonna die. so , clean the environment seems the most im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, for example, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66144217758 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495356037152 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1786667707 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.875 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4583333333 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95833333333 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350366842708 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117551860524 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105127579203 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221238917318 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398070132124 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, for example, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments