Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important ways to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, people's health problems are attracting more and more attention. There are many ways to keep healthy. Some people say that improving the environment is the best way to keep healthy.But I think the best way to keep healthy is to take more exercise and have a regular schedule.
Life lies in exercise. Exercise is the best way to keep healthy. Long-term exercise can build our bodies more stronger, give us a good figure and bring us a good mood. For example, There was a period of time when I was under great pressure in study and often felt depressed. When I was in a bad mood, I would eat a lot of food to enrich myself.that make me more fatter. but after a period of exercise, I not only lost weight but also became more optimistic and confident.So I think exercise is a useful method to keep health.
Good regular schedule are also very important. I am sure that our health is often determined by our daily habits. Long-term bad habits do us a great deal of harm.Good habits can also make our life longer. For example, one of my friends stayed at home during the holiday and stayed up late watching football competition ,drinking beer and sleeping during the day for two months. Then he went to a football match and fainted on the field within 20 minutes. The main reason why he fainted was that he didn't have good living habits. Our daily habits have a great influence on our health, so we can see how important it is to have a good regular schedule .
Protecting the environment also plays a certain role in people's health. When we live in a good environment, we can breathe fresher air and drink cleaner water. But that's not the main thing. We can install air purifiers or water purifiers and things like that to make our surroundings cleaner. As long as we have a good living habit and take more exercise, the environment will not be the main factor to harm our health.
So in my opinion, sufficient exercise and a regular schedule are the best ways to keep healthy. Without sufficient exercise and regular rest, our physical health will become worse and worse, which will have a bad influence on our later life. So let’s we keep a regular schedule and exercise more, in the harvest of a good body at the same time can also harvest happiness and a sense of achievement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
...ronment is the best way to keep healthy.But I think the best way to keep healthy is...
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...Long-term exercise can build our bodies more stronger, give us a good figure and bring us a g...
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...resher air and drink cleaner water. But thats not the main thing. We can install air ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, i think, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55314009662 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52015708934 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471014492754 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4421710118 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5416666667 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887638319586 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305448765473 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367632523779 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586423139822 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379353553999 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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