Do you agree or disagree with the following statement There is never a good reason to be impolite rude to other people | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
There is never a good reason to be impolite (rude) to other people.

With the increasing overall literacy rate among the society, an increasing attention has been paid on quality education, especially for adolescents. With this era trend, an controversy about how to treat people has raised up: whether it's not good to be impolite to other people. Frankly speaking, I totally agree with the perspective with reasons.

Above all, being rude to other people would contract our social circle eventually, saying that people's relationships with each other would be damaged due to the rude words. Just have an imagination, if your friend doesn't take your sense into consideration, always says impolite words to you, borrow your stuffs without requiring, literally saying, no one could tolerate that rude behaviors from friends in a long term. From then on, people tend to devoid the catch with you in order to avoid of suffering those uncomfortable behaviors. Whereas compared to the polite people, they always take your feel into their consideration, as your friends, they are likely to avoid of the behaviors that would hurt your friendship. In this comparison, most people are inclined to make friends with someone who are polite without doubt, as their considerable behaviors render us to believe they regard us as their real friends, while the people with rude behaviors seem like don't take our friendship seriously. Eventually, friends with impolite people are likely to keep away form the one, which means the rude one would lost his friends unfortunately.

Furthermore, impolite behaviors brings about unfavorable impacts on the would society. And when I say this, I means that impolite people always regard themselves as the center of the world, they doesn't care anything else, including the public effects. For instance, rude people might occupy the elder-target seats on buses, say bad words when a controversy emerged between others, etc. Hence, this impolite behaviors would apparently influence other people, the elder, children, cleaning workers and so on. There's an online survey on Sina.com revealed the same results: over 65 percent of passengers on buses hate someone who are impolite, because their existence and behaviors really damage others' good modes and they are likely to trigger problems. To some extent, the present of impolite people is a trouble to others.

However, without the exception of people who are impolite but nice, they are indeed exist. However, as most impolite people I've met aren't aggregable and nice, and reminding of the unfavorable experience that stayed with some rude person, I still contend the idea that it's not good to be rude to other people.

In a nutshell, supported by the explanation I mentioned above, either from individual perspective or social perspective, there's evert reason to believe that it's not good to be impolite to other people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y for adolescents. With this era trend, an controversy about how to treat people h...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ust have an imagination, if your friend doesnt take your sense into consideration, alw...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he people with rude behaviors seem like dont take our friendship seriously. Eventual...
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Line 3, column 1109, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...the one, which means the rude one would lost his friends unfortunately. Furthermo...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...e would society. And when I say this, I means that impolite people always regard them...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...selves as the center of the world, they doesnt care anything else, including the publi...
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Suggestion: There's
..., children, cleaning workers and so on. Theres an online survey on Sina.com revealed t...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
... are impolite but nice, they are indeed exist. However, as most impolite people Ive m...
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Suggestion: I've
...exist. However, as most impolite people Ive met arent aggregable and nice, and remi...
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Suggestion: aren't
...owever, as most impolite people Ive met arent aggregable and nice, and reminding of t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...dual perspective or social perspective, theres evert reason to believe that its not go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, frankly, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, still, then, whereas, while, for instance, i mean

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24889867841 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67731345488 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4444699755 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.388888889 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321123947654 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109234276166 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710263483528 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19289683808 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354292982556 0.0645574589148 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, frankly, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, still, then, whereas, while, for instance, i mean

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments