Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
There is never a good reason to be impolite (rude) to other people.
If someone do something that you do not like, what should you do? If they spoke some rumors let you unhappy, do you rude them? Everyone have the mood changes, so some people think there is never a good reason to be rude to other people, but others disagree. I also agree the later.
First, i think everyone have the mood changes. We should be a polite persons , but when others do not polite. We do not have the reason respect them. For example, when i am in the school, i am remember cearly my classmate passed by my desk and accidentally knocked my glass cup to the ground and broke it. I I wanted to get angry with him, but I realized he didn't mean it and I didn't scold him unpolitely. But he was very anger to me. Amd he said why i put the cup so near by the side. It led to he slight passed me and broke it. He looks like more and more anger. I think why he did not apology to me, was it he broken my cup? I think i have to argue with he. But we should argue rudely with him, don't swear because it's the most basic courtesy. However, We can't swallow our pride because it's not our fault. I think I can accept and apologize if I made a mistake.
To be honest, we should polite to others. Because, many evaluation people, wethere affect good people, they will think are yiu polite? However, i think happy it is the most important. If we are in trouble. we just do what you think is correct.
Taking into account all these factors, we could safely draw the conclusion that when we have the unique reasons, we can do something without polite.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
If someone do something that you do not like, what sh...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...you unhappy, do you rude them? Everyone have the mood changes, so some people think ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gree. I also agree the later. First, i think everyone have the mood changes. W...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'person'?
Suggestion: person
...the mood changes. We should be a polite persons , but when others do not polite. We do ...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d changes. We should be a polite persons , but when others do not polite. We do no...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... reason respect them. For example, when i am in the school, i am remember cearly ...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... For example, when i am in the school, i am remember cearly my classmate passed ...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remembered'.
Suggestion: remembered
... example, when i am in the school, i am remember cearly my classmate passed by my desk a...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: I
...y glass cup to the ground and broke it. I I wanted to get angry with him, but I rea...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...o get angry with him, but I realized he didnt mean it and I didnt scold him unpolitel...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
..., but I realized he didnt mean it and I didnt scold him unpolitely. But he was very a...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e was very anger to me. Amd he said why i put the cup so near by the side. It led...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...to me. Amd he said why i put the cup so near by the side. It led to he slight passed me...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to the slight'?
Suggestion: to the slight
...put the cup so near by the side. It led to he slight passed me and broke it. He looks like m...
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e. But we should argue rudely with him, dont swear because its the most basic courte...
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Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...gue rudely with him, dont swear because its the most basic courtesy. However, We ca...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ts the most basic courtesy. However, We cant swallow our pride because its not our f...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hey will think are yiu polite? However, i think happy it is the most important. I...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...i think happy it is the most important. If we are in trouble. we just do what you ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...e most important. If we are in trouble. we just do what you think is correct. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16666666667 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18736895645 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5425693541 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.0833333333 100.406767564 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54166666667 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212765633424 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602657251878 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806814595488 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149669024326 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15389196181 0.0645574589148 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 11.7677419355 38% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 10.9000537634 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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