Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the University, there is a very important part is joining the clubs. And there are the number of clubs and some of the purpose of the activities from club are helping others. This way is called volunteering. And also there are many other activities such as doing sports and arts. Form my perspective, l prefer to do the volunteer. Volunteer jobs have many different areas like helping others, contributing for society and so on. And each of these work take great importance for students. Now l will take about some volunteer activities and use examples to support my ideal.
First of all, teaching students in the primary school. Teaching students can improve their ability of learning. Because teaching others can remember better than just getting knowledge from teachers. Although the knowledge of teaching in primary school is very simple for college students, it plays the same role. Take my sister as an example. When she taught mathematics to primary school students, she suddenly aroused a lot of knowledge that she had forgotten. But she still remembers the knowledge that she remembered by teaching others. Also they can accumulate the working experience fro their future career, say the example mentioned just now, my sister goes to the best school to teach cause she has teaching experience, so she is excellent among the other competitors.
In addition, do some volunteer work is also a good choice. Because it is a good way to improve criticizes’ sense of social responsibility. Take my self experience as an example. Last summer vacation, l joined a environmental protection organization named Green Future. And l went to there to do some volunteer about collect the rubbish in the downtown. We collected many recyclable rubbish like boxes, paper, glass and so on. Then we sent these to the processing center. And l thought, not only can protect the environment but also can develop the sense of protection environment.
Admittedly, doing sports also good. For students, cause doing sports is a good way for students to release pressure and can help students to stretch out. But considering the benefits with doing volunteer job, the advantageous of doing sports are not obviously.
In a word, school should keep the volunteer job, because not only can develop their own studying ability, but also can do thee contribution to the society.
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- Some people believe that in order to improve educational quality we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism on their teachers but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom Discuss both views and 56
- Some young people are free in the evenings or have days off at school which way can bring them the most benefit Accumulating work experience by taking a part time job or volunteering in a community Learning to play a sport Learning to play a musical instr 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07179487179 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81547802376 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505128205128 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9452996564 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6428571429 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.60714285714 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166114130655 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449977705577 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374746908945 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104076631189 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427720495033 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.