Some jobs can pay high salaries but require employees to leave their family and friends. Some jobs pay few salaries but allow employees staying with family and friends. Which job do you prefer? Why?
Regardless of an affluent and basically-satisfied life we are living today, the pursuit of wealth and a more material life never die. When it comes to a problem related to a suitable job, some people would like to work in a place which is far from his or her home with a relatively high salary. As to me, I would like to work in a place where is not far from my home so that I can spend much time on my friends and family.
To begin with, it is nothing without friends and family sharing happiness even if one person make more money than others. As we all know emotions among people are something all people cannot ignore. That is to say, making money as a responsibility for people is not only for themselves but also for their relative people. Just imagine what it would be like if one man makes a lot of money as the relationships with his friends and family becoming more and more worse. I really doubt if it is worth to do so. It is love instead of money that act as an important role in our life. Only when people realize the importance of all kinds of love, can we regard making money as an interesting thing.
Moreover, because of less communication, making money alone in a place without good friends or family will generate quite many troubles for people . The answer to this problem involves many factors. The first reason can be obviously seen. In any event, to improve the relationships among people, it is always necessary for people to communicate as many times as they can. For instance, Jeff, a teacher, had to teach in another city rather than the city where his family are. His daughter who is only 5 years old hardly has love from his father as Jeff only spends four days staying with her. As a result, Jeff even doubted whether he has a daughter, of course, that is a little bit of an exaggeration. To include, it is normal for people who works in a far place tacking all kinds of troubles concerned relationships on account of scare communication.
Admittedly, sometimes it is a better choice for people to work for a higher salary even if he or she will have to go to a far place. A particular example for this is when a family suffers from an accident result in a lot of money is needed in a short time. In that sense, I would have to say choosing a job with a higher salary will be a better choice.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw conclusion that making money is not only for material life but also for people we love. If you are not a person who need much money in a short time, why not spend more time staying with your family and friends?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...one person make more money than others. As we all know emotions among people are s...
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Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...is friends and family becoming more and more worse. I really doubt if it is worth to do so...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... generate quite many troubles for people . The answer to this problem involves man...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...he has a daughter, of course, that is a little bit of an exaggeration. To include, it is n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, as to, for instance, of course, as a result, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34702258727 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51500385486 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47227926078 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2127227355 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0434782609 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1739130435 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146975531168 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441011918084 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482826715584 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906126953047 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173047733793 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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