Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Depending on personal experience, some people conclude that the negative effects of movies and television overwhelm their benefits meanwhile others hold the opposite idea. From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the latter one.
Admittedly, movies and television have some negative effects on the way young people behave. If the young people are addicted to movies or televisions, they will spend less time on exercise, which will cause them obesity. Moreover, overuses of eyes will cause short sight. What’s worse, youngster may stay at home for long time and lose the opportunity to take part in the extracurricular activities so that they cannot feel the real world and the fun shared with their peers.
However, movies and television have more positive effect. The first reason immediately comes to mind is that movies and television have long been regarded as a tool to disseminate information and knowledge. Take television as instance, people watch news to know what happened near them and to know what happened in the country or around the world. In addition, children usually gain more knowledge through watching science and education program such as Animal World or National Geography, etc. It’s not hard to see that movies and television are positive or even vital.
Another reason which deserves some words here advocating my attitude is that entertainment media is also a kind of entertainment. After long time studying or working, watching a good movie or TV show can relax our mind because it gives us a chance to escape from the stresses that often consume our thoughts. When we are immersed in a movie or television show, we often 'lose ourselves' and are distracted from the worries and stresses that typically fill our minds.
All in all, despite a few cases of negative influence, I believe that the overall impact of television and movies is positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71368005081 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8496748409 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235609360916 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938556420797 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106756651325 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123217553655 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532854237747 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.