Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
TVs and movies are indeed have many harmful effects to young people in some aspect, for example, they are addictive, cause myopia and some of the TV programs only care about creating catchy but inferior contents, which by all means have negative effects. However, to assert that they have more negative effects on the way young people behave, is a bit serious. TVs and movies are just another double-edged sword that can give either pros or cons, which completely depends on how people use it.
Although I did mention that many inferior TV program and commercial movies gives people harmful effects. However, many content creators still give people high quality programs for people to watch. In movies industry, besides from some stereotype commercial movies, there are still many great movies have a meaningful topic such as autobiography of business tycoon that tells people a successful story and dramas that makes people think about racial inequality. Among all this, recently a documentary directed by Leonardo Dicaprio just reflected how severe the global warming is and encouraged people to do something to prevent the only planet.
Aside from meaningful movies, news is another necessary element that I believe TVs are not evil. In the era of globalization, not only does one needs to know information of one’s country, but also needs to care about what happened in other country because they all affected each other; 2008 housing crisis in US eventually became global financial crisis was a great exemplary. And people rely on news to acquire the latest information. Besides, news also make people think focus on the important social issues and hence help the underprivileged minority. Few years ago when the 311 earthquake struck Japan, some people were past away and others lost their home. And thanks to news broadcasting information to other country, Japan got a lot of donation and volunteer rescue team. And the most important part is also make people consider if nuclear is safe enough, which is the most powerful part of TV news - make people focus and think on social issues.
However, just like I mentioned, some people does get addicted on TV shows and movies and lost motivation to do their work. Others might watch low quality TV shows and start to learn bad behalfs from them, for instance, curses and smoking. Nevertheless, to state that TVs and movies gives more negative effects is just like to assert that reading books have more cons than pros. I believe that generally people would consider that reading books is great and makes people knowledgeable. But reading books may also give people myopia and some books still contains curse words and bad behalf. Hence, I believe is not about books, TVs and movies. It’s about what content is inside the media and what do people choose to watch and read.
In a nutshell, I believe that TVs and movies still have many positive effects on young people. If negative consequences are taking effects on young children, adults should keep the eye on the content that their children watch. After all, watch TVs and movies correctly, young children can still become knowledgeable just like reading books.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, after all, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2664.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.055028463 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47790685517 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485768500949 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5101486923 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9583333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210288516276 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693536591019 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758950323922 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137815017331 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704064242816 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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