Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.
Our modern life is much more complicated than three decades ago. Although for a lot of people living is difficult, many people would like to help other people. While some people believe that nowadays people are more interested to help people who they don't know, others agree with the abverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of view, in modern era, people want to help other people that they don't know. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays people want to share their happiness with others to make the community a beautiful place for everyone. In fact, societies want to go beyond their goal and dreams by improving our view about life and impact of others happiness in our life. We all know that happiness cannot be achived, If all people of society aren't happy. How we can feel happy, if we know that a person is hungry or is sleeping in the cold winter? Living in the modern era is hard for almost a large number of people, but kindness is a factor that led people to help a person even they don't know. We see that an unknown person gives millions to spend in universities' scholarships or in the foster system to start a hope for future for next generations.
Furthermore, some programs in the TV or social media encourage people for charity works, which was rare in the past. Almost lots of people in the community are involve in the charity works. This is a valuble factor in all societies and all young people would love to join these programs to see joys of happiness in the eyes of poor and homless people. In the past, people always helped someones that they know very well. For example, nowadays in developed countries, there are a lot of charity centers that voulenters can give food such as soup or chicken to the homeless persons. These organizations started their work recently in our country, and a lot of universites' students spend some of their time to help other people. Therefore, in modern life, people learn that this is not important who will get food or cloth from us, the essential thing is that we have to help each other and some day we might need help.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that nowadays people are more interested to help people they don't even saw before than they were in the past. This is because that people try to make the community a better home for all members, and also socity encourage people to work voulentrly in the charity centers to help people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...more interested to help people who they dont know, others agree with the abverse ide...
^^^^
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ple want to help other people that they dont know. I feel this way for two reasons, ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ot be achived, If all people of society arent happy. How we can feel happy, if we kno...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ng in the modern era is hard for almost a large number of people, but kindness is a factor that l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t led people to help a person even they dont know. We see that an unknown person giv...
^^^^
Line 2, column 745, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a hope for future for next generations. Furthermore, some programs in the TV or ...
^^^
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
...ost lots of people in the community are involve in the charity works. This is a valuble...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...are more interested to help people they dont even saw before than they were in the p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57562076749 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36368446815 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476297968397 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2539930746 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.35 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.15 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440192078018 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149312198417 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116509584724 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313825732187 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915596506604 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.