In today's fast-paced modern world people are more tensed and stressed out than they were in the past. So, giving happiness to someone gives a feeling of satisfaction to the people whether they are known to them or complete strangers. I totally agree with the fact that people in current times are more willing to provide help to people even if they do not know them. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, with respect to the past, there is an increase in the number of NGOs who have come forward to provide help to needy people. Evidently, these NGOs not only provide the things that people donate but also take care of their daily lives and help them to progress. One of the examples of such an NGO in India is Goonj. Goonj helps underprivileged people to excel in their lives and help them to get rid of bad habits caused due to poverty. I myself donated my grandmother's clothes to the organization. After donating I felt a sense of satisfaction and the feeling was amazing.
Second, in today's hectic life of individuals, they are stressed out, and to overcome this there is no better feeling than charity. In particular, donation gives a positive vibe to one's life and helps individuals forget their tensions. This is best demonstrated by my personal example. When I just entered my college as a fresher I was facing stress issues as I had not scored up to my expectations in the 12th standard. Certainly, this affected my grades in the first year and in turn increased the stress. But, when I joined the National Service Scheme (NSS) of my college which helps people who are in need I forgot the tensions which I had. In the organized donation drive termed Joy of Giving Week, I donated some of my old toys, clothes, and book for the students who are in need. This event helped proved as a stressbuster for me. I am sure that if I had not participated in the event I would not have been able to forget my tensions.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people are more willing to donate today than they were in the past. This is because of the increase in the number of NGOs and because this gives people a sense of satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...o them or complete strangers. I totally agree with the fact that people in current times are more willin...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ular, donation gives a positive vibe to ones life and helps individuals forget their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, in particular, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4725 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53804920165 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3556151777 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1904761905 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0476190476 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335291613128 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964843747294 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100623015075 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233967599999 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120165361511 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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