Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don t know for example by giving clothing and food to people who need them than they were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support y | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples

It's important to know if people are willing to help each other in times of need. No matter how well we plan for our future there may come a day when we need help. As a result, it is crucial to consider whether human beings are willing to help people they don't know or not. In my view people are less willing to help people they are not familiar with.
First, in recent years scamming has become easier. There are many so called organizations that advertise themselves as charity organizations but after sometime they are caught embezelling donators money and running away from the country. These scammers are hardly ever caught. For example, a few months ago a friend of mine advertised a charity organization working for the betterment of orphans life in her instagram story and a week ago I contacted her about donating some money in the name of a deceased friend. When I talked to her about my purpose she broke down crying telling me that the president of this organization had ran a way with more than ten million dollars of charity money. Based on this type of experiences people are becoming more sceptical about charity organizations and have become less willing to donate any money even to organizations with years of experience.
Second, people have no certainty about their future. In recent years there have been a lot of fluctuations in prices and even the prices of basic necessities have increased by at least three times, not to mention medicine and the like. This leads to human beings becoming stressed and nervous. Hence, people feel inclined to gather and use their money for the unknown future rather than spending it on charity as donations. For example, some days ago as I was walking in the street a beggar approached me asking me to buy him some food but I was so stressed about the next semester tuition that I ignored him even though the amount that I had to spend wasn't a considerable amount.
In conclusion, I believe that people have become less willing to help others than they were in the past. Because there are a lot more scamers and less assurance about future in recent years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... beings are willing to help people they dont know or not. In my view people are less...
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Line 2, column 515, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...money in the name of a deceased friend. When I talked to her about my purpose she br...
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Line 2, column 630, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
... the president of this organization had ran a way with more than ten million dollar...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ations in prices and even the prices of basic necessities have increased by at least three times,...
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Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...n though the amount that I had to spend wasnt a considerable amount. In conclusion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67292225201 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52498244998 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533512064343 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7161523373 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.529411765 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240102909017 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913382732038 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100626707473 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173536513494 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997725314164 0.0645574589148 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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