do you agree or disagree with the following statement? one of the best ways that parents can help teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take part-time job.
It is widely accepted since the down of civilization in the contemporary word parents has played a significant role in children success. The controversial question which arises here is whether parents should encourage children to attend part-time job for preparing them as successful person in future. The answer depends on the lens through which one is looking and perceiving the word.
I, nonetheless contend that the more experience in childhood the more triumph in adulthood. In the following paragraph, two conspicuous reasons will cogently illustrate this perspective.
The first remarkable reason to be mentioned is that teenagers could learn indispensable social and metal skill before going to work market also they can get the decent job in the future. More over in capricious market of now days its better you learned a lot of skill so they can get the first step in property ladder easier than other people. More over when does part-time they can cope with heavy workload otherwise they can’t endure problems of work in the next years. Furthermore when teenagers experience part-time job they can find in which field are better or interested in which vocation. For instance the statistics revealed by a recently conducted research in the Masachusett Institute of Technology (MIT) shown that people who take a part-time job in the past are more successful in the their job as adult.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance is that teenagers has a part-time job so they don’t have enough time for vandalize or bad activity. Due to that fact they get away from bad friends and help them be a wholesome person. In addition when they do some work not only they earn money but also they feel are useful for society and doesn’t feel they are marginalized. My personal example is a compelling example of this fact. When I was teenager I used to stray in street in midnight so I became friend for drug dealer because I think I am not good enough for any work but when my parents met my friend they suggest me a part-time job in the evening so in the midnight I was exhausted and sleep like a log therefore had I didn’t this work I would have a addict.
Finally, by taking all the mentioned points account, one will undoubtly draw the conclusion that all in all part-time job enhance life style of teenager also benefit of it is cast negative aspect. In fact there are a myriad of reason, supporting the above statement, which could be mention but are embraced owing to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, nonetheless, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83140877598 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70876179467 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547344110855 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5623552929 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.058823529 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4705882353 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293532309408 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085261555102 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651318924646 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140199160109 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645524674067 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.