Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Preparing teenage children for their adult life is one of the parents' goals. There have been many debates on how parents can achieve this goal. While there are some people that believe taking a part-time job is one of the best ways to prepare teenage children for their future life, others disagree. From my point of view, taking a part-time job can prepare teenagers for their adult life for three reasons.
First of all, taking a part-time job can teach them how to be a responsible person. While teenagers work, they will be given certain responsibilities which they have to do for a long period of time. If they do not work properly or at the right time, they will not be paid. Therefore, in order to be paid, they have to work hard and regularly which can help them to be a responsible person.
The second reason which supports my idea is that by taking part-time jobs they can gain experiences which can help them for their future jobs. Working can raise teenagers' experiences toward interpersonal relationships, people's characteristics, and providing employer's expectations. These kinds of experiences are essential factors, and can help a person have a better performance in a workplace.
Finally, taking a part-time job can teach them the ability to plan and organize. When a teenager has a job and also goes to school and needs to study, she or he does not have the time for doing trivial activities such as watching television or playing video games. Accordingly, they have to make plans to use their time as efficiently as they can, so that they become able to do their responsibilities on time.
To sum up, taking a part-time job is one of the best ways for teenage children to prepare for their adult life because they can learn to be a responsible person, gather experiences for their future jobs, and learn the ability to plan. For better learning, I recommend that they take a part-time job in a field that they like, so that they can gain experiences in that specific field which they might continue in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74366197183 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74465667251 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461971830986 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1020861106 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430496042837 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188157371497 0.076458572812 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131174020728 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284679676855 0.150856017488 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128469453394 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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