Beyong a shadow of a doubt, in the current era, watching movie has become indispensable in people’s lives. On that ground, this is because movies is a source amusement through which it does not only entertain viewers but also enlightened them. In this regard, a plathora of people possess the conviction that people should watch movies only when it contributes valuble information to them. However, others look at this concept through a different lens and contend that any form of movies is beneficial to watch for human beings. For the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that Irrefitably, watching movies can help to mitigate stress level. No one can deny the fact that, nowadays, people tend to carry a lot of strees in their minds due to increasing level of work load and similary, students show stress due to higher level of competitions they face in their academics. Thefore, watching various movies can divert their thoughts to another directions which would make them revealed. To exemplify, a date statistics collected from an emperical study that is conducted at the University of california indicates that approximately 78% people prefer to watch television after coming back to home from home, no matter how tired they are. Indeed, so I do. This is the only way which can make me calm after handling a tons of work load at office. Admittedly, it is judicious to say that people can reduce their anxiety and stress by watching televsion shows.
Another noteworthy point striking in my mind is that even though some movies shows do not directly teach us about real life, they can leave indirect message intoour subconscious mind. In other words, comedy movies make us laugh, romantic movies show us how we should love with purity and high-fie shows provide information about latest techonlogy. To shed more light on this, My personal experience is a compelling example of what has been elaborated above. When I was a child I used to see numerous different kinds of documentaries. One of my favourite documentary was based on the life of Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam. He was a renowed scientist in my coutry. In real life, he was belong to poor family and with his constant hard work and persistance, he became a popular scientiest. COnsdequently, I learned many precious real life experience from his life which I implemented in my life. What’s more. his findamental thoughts tought me to never give up for the goal regardless of big obstruction we may face. Ultimately, this reinforces my belief that many forms of movies are made to teach us vital information.
Finally, yet importantly, seeing movies help people to unwind their knowledge and broaden the horizon besides a curriulum studies. On top of that, it shows ways to use our imigination whereby people can become creative and successful in the life. By way of example, i want to mention a movie name called surprsing facts. In this movies, this movies is based on the northen lights and how it works. The director of movie tries to show the basic scientific fundamentals which works to produce northen lights and which is really rare. Besides, a highly advanced technology is used all together to produce the real image of northen lights. Thus, these type of movies make students to utilise their imigination in their academic carriculum which ulimately enhance their education grade.
To reciptulate, in spite of the fact that many people may not agree with my viewpoint, I utterly belive that watching movies have myriad of advantages. This is because it reduces our stress, and because it teaches valubale lessons in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, thus, in other words, in spite of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3103.0 1977.66487455 157% => OK
No of words: 622.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98874598071 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99398916966 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74301075488 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 338.0 212.727598566 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 969.3 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9177302819 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.096774194 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.064516129 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09677419355 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265239379125 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623257187811 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497044243598 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140514616548 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436388829678 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 86.8835125448 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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