Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In today's world, following celebrities is of paramount importance for younger people and they have a passion for this. A controversial question that is raised regarding this issue is whether young people follow the decisions and opinions of these celebrities or they should take the advice of elder people. Some people possess the conviction that the former could be more satisfactory whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more fruitful. I personally, content that this issue is multifaceted. I think this issue can take two sides of attributes: the negative side and the positive side. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs present a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is using elder people's advice and opinion are wiser, They have experience in certain fields and subjects and can tell us what way should we choose in our lives. Sometimes young people try to test new things that they never faced in their lives like traveling abroad for studying. In this situation, elder people, who live aboard, is a pivotal role in the students' lives. Consider my personal experience to make the point clear. When I was a teenager, I decided to study the Low and worked in the court. I was very inquisitive about the crims and lows, but my school adviser took several meetings with me and explained which fields and majors were suitable for me.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that sometimes elder people may not be aware of all the dimensions and consequences of new events. In this situation, they take a piece of low-level risk advice. In this situation, as I mentioned before, celebrities, who are young and are so risk takers, are stimulated younger and it is agreeable to follow them. In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I prefer to hear all the people's opinions and then decide to do. Consequently, it is highly recommended that young people consider all aspects.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ger and it is agreeable to follow them. In brief, contemplating all the aforementi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, whereas, i think, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96783625731 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76694254874 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.095941244 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9411764706 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198877510428 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582333580059 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558061580948 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13227623798 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328096553155 0.0645574589148 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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