Current our life more convenience and better than ever before. Modern society have produced some interesting things to life better. Some people believe that our current way of life will have a positive effect on future generations, and others disagree. Personally, I believe that it has a negative impact on future generations for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
The main reason is that as technology improves the need of movement is decreasing, and thus it causes that humanity is getting lazy. People can do a lot of their works by using internet that is a product of technology. Not only they can do their works, but also they can do their daily things. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in university, some days that I didn’t want to go to the school, I used to watch lessons via the internet on computer. In addition, while I watched the videos, I would order online food instead of cooking. At this time I gained a lot of weight. As you can see, people can do their works without move by using technology. It can causes lazy, and obesity.
The second reason is that the vehicles that we create in order to facilitate to our lives lead to pollution. This pollution impacts not only our lives, but also all environment. The nature links all species. If one species are damage, all species are effected. For example, the cars release harmful gases into the atmosphere. This harmful gases cause global warming, and climate change, and thus whole environment is effected this situation. Recent studies shows most sea creature endangered extinction owing to climate change. In addition, experts warning people who live in Delhi, India in order to increase of the rate of pollution in the air. This experiment taught me that actually, we are damaging to environment, and hence the world getting bad.
In conclusion, our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations. This is because the human population is getting lazy due to the fact that technology facilitates our life too much, and because some vehicles generating by human lead to pollution. We must make better decision about lazy and pollution to ensure a better tomorrow.
Our current way of life will…
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generation. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific answers or examples to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that due to the advancement of technology, life today has become so comforting and relaxing. In the given scenario, whether the present way of our living has influenced our upcoming generation in a good or bad way has triggered heated debate. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly our current activity will affect the forth coming generation. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, population is growing at an alarming rate. Rapid growth of people means the more usage of available resources. Nowadays, we human have become so lazy that we need a very easy life. To cite an example, If everybody start to use car for their comfort then there will be the scarcity of fuel in near future. Similarly, the excessive use of car results in air pollution as well . Eventually this will lead to pollution and climate change and repercussions should be bear by our future generation. Therefore, this how the upcoming generation are going to be affected by our current deeds.
Next, In this digital modern world, we can obtain anything and everything just in one click away. To be more precise, we don’t have to go out for our necessities be it food, clothes, electronic gadget and so on. As a result, this is making us a very self centered person. In other word, we don’t value our family and don’t spend much time with them which consequently hampers the upcoming era as they learn the same thing from us. For instance, I mostly spend my time doing work or seeing movie on my laptop and my little sister she also watches cartoons on desktop. What I mean to say is , she or I could spend our time with family rather than indulging in unnecessary stuff. Thus, this clearly shows, future generation immites things from us and we should be mindful of our activity.
All things considered, the current way of our living is not welcoming for our upcoming generation. If we continue to live a life as we are currently living then the outcome of this will be deleterious.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86578947368 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66943689789 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.077339148 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.96 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256679394138 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677590540373 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131805398524 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176481110972 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140445986567 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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