Nowadays, there are many problems that we push under the rug. For example, we are facing climate change crises everyday, and we have a small interaction in real life. Further, I believe these problems that we ignore will have serious consequences in the future.
Firstly, climate change is a very important issue. It is related to harmful side-materials that we produce in everyday life. Although many scientists, corporations and governments try to prevent it from happening, the way we live our lives makes the fatal end inevitable. Many industries are depending on chemicals that cannot dissolve easily in nature, such as plastic. Plastics are everywhere. For example, the keyboard I am typing this essay is made up of plastic. Unless people recycle these, the future generations will have to drown under plastic garbage dumps.
Secondly, we interact less and less with people in real life than before because of social media. Everyday, gradually, social media dominates people’s lives, they post how they dress, where they eat. In my opinion, this is very toxic and keeps people from interacting with each other in real life. From another perspective, unfortunate COVID-19 makes us prone to use social media more. Even the research is going on via social media. For example, I met new collaborators online to start a new project, but I have never seen them in real life. In time, we “normalize” these situations and get used to them, thus leading to shallow social interactions among future generations.
Overall, I believe that the way we live now, although we want to change, is somehow problematic and we ignore the consequences. Therefore, I agree with the given argument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...le, we are facing climate change crises everyday, and we have a small interaction in rea...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e fatal end inevitable. Many industries are depending on chemicals that cannot dissolve easil...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...fe than before because of social media. Everyday, gradually, social media dominates peop...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83044999514 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6031486211 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8421052632 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135548215131 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415926685883 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452338605856 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832514165558 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136798315491 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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