Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Modern development in technology such as access to the internet affects society in many different ways. In my opinion, access to the internet is enormously beneficial to both individuals and the whole community. I feel this way for three reasons, which will explore in the following essay.
First of all, students in universities and colleges can access to a wide range of information through this. When learning new things, it is important to explore the world and find compatible and relevant materials to get superior knowledge. Through the internet, we can find many published journals, conference papers as well as online lectures to learn any complex theories very easily. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I am a university undergraduate student, I want to learn the most recent machine learning theories to do my final year project and our university is not offering any courses related to this area. Therefore, I gain the best knowledge about that by following the video lecture series by a professor from a university in the US. This example demonstrates how the internet helps to strengthen students’ knowledge.
Secondly, people are more active and engage with social works because they can freely exchange ideas online. In countries all over the globe, people are connected through social networking services to share recent news, so people share their thoughts with everyone and they intended to help others as quickly as possible. For instance, recently, the Amazon forest destroyed because of several fires. In that scenario, people all over the world express their thoughts and they share their ideas to save those valuable forests. Some photos shared through the internet provide the feeling that how wildlife suffer from this and these cause human beings to think about deforestation.
Thirdly, people can maintain their relationships with faraway people and this will connect people together. Since all people are connected with social network platforms such as Facebook, Whatsapp and Viber, this will help to share their day to day activities with them. Moreover, form facilities like video calling can help people to feel like their loved ones are with them.
In conclusion. I strongly agree with the argument that wide use of the internet is important to the world population. This is because students get the chance to learn new things, people can know information quickly and they can connect with their friends more easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27067669173 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6895862431 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1232041318 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.15 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997225900233 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343390921101 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461017535396 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650488187846 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336219716727 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.