Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
No one can deny that our lives now days depend a lot on technology usage, where internet is of huge contribution for that usage. That being said, I agree completely with the importance of the internet in our daily life. I believe that too many people, and organization, cant imagine a day without internet usage. There are many reasons why the internet usage is indispensable and that will be explained in the following.
First, on an individual level, all our cell phones, tablets, watches and laptops run on a more beneficial way when connected to the internet. One of the examples, is the internet based applications used by students all over the world to help them with their studies or that ones that the students who are not living with their families or studying abroad use to call/video call their families to check on each other. Others depend on the internet to read the news, send emails, learning about new things or even find an answer to a question that they have no clue about.
Second, on a bigger level, all the big organizations, like hospitals, schools, insurance companies and even the government, depends in their daily work on internet usage, which is of great benefit for such organizations to run their work smoothly and quickly. For example, Insurance companies, which their work involves selling insurance plans and processing claims, can't do any of their duties in the absence of the internet, which in turns impact the client's life in a positive way. Also, hospitals now days use the internet to do different tasks that involves patients related health record and finances, that usually benefits the patient and the institution.
To sum that up, I believe that internet has a very positive effect on our lives, and it becomes already part of everyone's daily life and we can still benefit more from it with the rapidly increasing emergence of new technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92834890966 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67663435377 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7898149854 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.818181818 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181076556888 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702164259245 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499604082942 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10945726889 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125565601002 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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