Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that universities and colleges now days should be student oriented and not just curriculum oriented, and because of that, I believe that sports and social activities are as important as classes and definitely, libraries should receive a huge financial support as equal as the classes, and that for the following reasons.
First, the students go to universities and colleges to earn degrees in certain subjects and it would be very beneficial to get chances to do sports beside their classes. Because, being involved in any physical activity, enhances the academic outcomes. A lot of researches are being done these days about the importance of the involvement in any kind of sports and it's positive effect on the student's physical and mental health.
Second, having opportunities to socialize with peers through attending or organizing social events will help building normal socially active personality who can give a lot to their universities and communities. For example, students who attend medical or pharmacy schools, can help spread awareness about specific health issue through organizing a fundraising for the cause of that health issue. That way, they learn how to socialize while applying their knowledge for the benefit of their society.
Third, investing in libraries is very important for students, since most of their assignment and research work requiring library visits, it should never be of any less importance or quality than classes. Libraries are the student's gateway for success. For example, libraries should have all the materials, books, journals and electronic access to a variety of fields that serve a variety of schools in the universities, not only that, but also they should be equiped with the latest technologies such as computers, printers and wireless inernet system to better serve the students. I remember that I used to spend a a lot of time in the library, working on assignments or even studying.
Last but not the least, adopting a whole student approach where different aspects of the student's life are considered, excersice, socializing and investing in libraries should be of the same quality as classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, while, for example, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31412103746 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83179888977 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.26135191 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206370262549 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070861927637 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848557881848 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125116222303 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103383514454 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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