Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers play an important role in our society and without them it is true students can not get enough knowledge for the successful future in different fields. Some people are inclined towards the attitude that only in school, college and university there are teachers, whereas, some people have very opposite perspective. I believe, though, it is true parents are best teacher. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, in school teachers teaches students because they get paid for that but parents are the one who teaches us how to live in society, how to behave with elders and children without any pay. It is necessary for every child to know the basics of soceity and the difference between what is right and wrong. To exemplify, when I was in high school, in my class there was a boy once he hit me I was shock beacuse my parents accustomed to tell me that never beat any one either its your friend or sibling. I realize this is not good later my teacher told me do not get angry because he donot have his parents he is suffering from his presents condition and we are working on it. Thus, this example elucidates that people are lucky who have parents.
Secondly, parents always help theri children in any problematic situation and are the best advisors. It is essential to help students whenever they are in problem. For instance, when I passed ,y high school I was so confused because I did not get enough good score to get addmission in good university and I became absolutely depressed. In addition, my father told me that do not worry about score what ever you do, I will help no matter what than he said if you can not make for MBBS program go for pharmacy and now I am a liscensed pharmacist and school teachers guide me to waste my year and schedule for re exam because the only thing matters for them was business. Therefore, this instance illustrates that parents always are best advisors than teachers.
To wrap up, I believe that students can get educational knowledge by their teachers but the really knowledge about life comes from the parents as they are the bestest master of all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60506329114 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4741237348 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541772151899 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0672367215 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.266666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158950310107 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575667858424 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05080227187 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931170845405 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268862575564 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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