Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is an undeniable fact that parents have a major role in educating their children, and based on this, most parents try to get involved in their children education. Educating children as well as possible can have a lasting effect on their future. Most people believe that parents today are more aware of their role in their children education than ever before and they to help them to study better. I am almost of the opinion that, nowadays, parents try to do their best in order to educate their children. I feel this way for a couple of reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, modern parents are more educated than ever before, which make them a useful partner to train the children. Parents not only become more conscious about the importance of education for their children but are well-educated than ever before. These two factors give them the possibility of participating in their children education programs and helping them to learn efficiently. My experience is a compelling example of what I mean. My parents are well-educated, both of them are teacher which was very helpful in my education especially when I was a child. I remember when I was a high school student, my parents help me in a variety of ways. For example, when I had a problem in mathematics my mother who is a math teacher helped to overcome my shortcomings. Therefore, my grades were mostly superior, I could count on my parents help and they were aware that education can build up my future.
Secondly, nowadays, job competitions are very intense and there are a few job opportunities for uneducated people, and parents are aware of this fact. Although the jobs are diverse these days, most of such jobs are available for educated people. Parents try to foster their children in an atmosphere which could be helpful for the children. For instance, my brother as a father of two children tries to make an environment for his children in which the children have a chance to learn more. While my brother does not have an academic education, he tries to encourage his children to study. My brother is a good example of today's parents who try to foster their children as educated people because he knows that his children should study for being a helpful member of society.
In conclusion, I believe that modern parents are more aware of their role in children’s education and try to do their best in order to engage the children's study. This is because most parents are more educated and because parents are aware of the job competition and its hardships to get for uneducated people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76940133038 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70590479098 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423503325942 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9698549871 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310326379038 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119852753193 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829974984157 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229916194298 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588148858131 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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