Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reason and examples to support your opinion about it.
It is always so important for young adults to make right decisions about their life. These decisions directly affect their future pathways toward success or failure. Some people think that nowadays young people can decide about their own life by themselves which was not common during previous decades. However, some others still insist that parents have the main role in their children’s' decisions and they depend on their words no matter which period we are living in. In my view, young people changed and they are well capable of making their own choices by themselves for two main reasons.
First, they have access to various technologies which can provide them with beneficial information about any problem. In the past, children mostly considered their parents as their role model and source of information, since there was not any other significant source that can be used for making their decisions. For example, my friend, Jack, born and lived in a city outside the country where at that period even cellphones have not been operated by people there. So, there were a limited number of resources that can assist him in his desisions. He accepted what his parents told him to do in most of the situation, since he believed that they had enough experience to know what choice is good for him. However, today, by technological advancements Jack's kids mainly used the internet and libaries to find their answers about almost anything in their life.
Second, it is culturally acknowledged today that any person is responsible for his own life. Young people respect and follow their parents’ orders during old days, because they were taught and learned that young adults must be the followers of their parents and try to do whatever they say. In contrast, this cultural rule totally conformed during time and in recent years society admits the freedom of choice for any person. For instance, I used to have problem with my dad during my childhood, because he always forced his opinion about my vital decisions. However, this attitude diminished partially over time, as he noticed that social communities give so much value to youngsters who decide and choose their own decisions. So, culture and society play a crucial role in this change undoubtedly.
In conclusion, parents mostly assist their children with their decisions in the past which is altered in modern life due to many reasons. There is a cultural acceptance for independent youngsters who decide to stand on their own feet and life enhancements came to help them find their answers so easily without any needing any other persons around.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 373, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07390300231 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53636250246 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533487297921 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9882761429 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.631578947 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359328569647 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115900037656 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825911129377 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235212270069 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723159016854 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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