Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is not usually a good thing and we need to take actions at once.
Finding a panacea to deal with quandaries in such a complex world seems to be feat. It is vital for a person to find a way to reap the harvest of investments. Not all people concur when this issue arises. Being cognizant of the logic behind those who endorse or repudiate this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that, being patient is one of those underlying factors that pave (**) the way for an individual to reach success. Among a plentitude of reasons in support of this assertion, making more prudent decisions and losing momentum of shortcomings could be picked out for further analysis.
To commence with a consensus has yet to be reached; however, regarding making more fastidious decisions, based upon different general questionnaires in sundry countries, people are unanimously of the conviction that, being patient offers individuals unprecedented opportunities to implement their stamina in better ways through obstacles. To elucidate on, being patient provide a fertile ground for solicitous individuals to encounter all parts of their tribulation; consequently, they can examine all aspects of their precise decision which will end up with multitude of perquisites. Being patient may seem a squander of time at the first place; however, by looking more meticulously over it, they can contemplate their decision thoroughly in order to revise it; hence, they can interdict irreversible consequences which can save more time and effort in long term. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above. The result of a study carried out by Rice University unveiled the fact that the more patient the person is, the more prolific the outcomes of his decision will be.
In addition to the reason raised above, plunge of the errors could also substantiate the justifiability of the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief, as long as people try to act abruptly, their errors gain momentum; consequently, being patience is a crowing remedy to meet the demands of the job. To delineate, people were used to thinking that by acting with no patience they can achieve success in such a hyper competitive world; however, this notion underwent paradigm shifts to the extent that, they are of the belief that, outcomes of quick decisions are anything but profitable. Taking an impartial position not to turn blind eye to palatable effects of being quick in making decisions, it should be accentuate that, in order to keep up with the pace at which the world is progressing, we should act instantaneously; however, the deleterious impacts of this behavior take precedence over its infinitesimal privileges.
Drawing upon the reasons, discreetly put, although many sophisticated people may prove the otherwise, as far as my personal perspective to the topic is concerned, I reiterate that, having patience can leads to innumerable advantages. Not only does patience bring about wiser decisions, but also it culminate in less faults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of perquisites. Being patient may seem a squander of time at the first place; however, by...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accentuated'?
Suggestion: accentuated
...quick in making decisions, it should be accentuate that, in order to keep up with the pace...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
..., I reiterate that, having patience can leads to innumerable advantages. Not only doe...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'culminates'?
Suggestion: culminates
...ring about wiser decisions, but also it culminate in less faults.
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Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun faults is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ser decisions, but also it culminate in less faults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18930041152 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97842509165 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572016460905 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 793.8 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.0013090002 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.625 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707729204234 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243628146742 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262252314214 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461508253341 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369625772891 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 11.7677419355 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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