Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
People have been searching for different ways to become richer and wealthier more prosperous since the beginning of the ages. A theory exists that people cannot stop on what they possess and they permanently long for new heights and achievements. I am willing to share this statement and I completely agree to it due to the reasons mentioned hereinafter.
Firstly, people think that the main purpose of their life is competing with others living organisms. People try their best to seem wealthier than they are, only to gain some respect among a group of people. Moreover, these people think that the power is considered to be in money and if they are rich, they can control everything and everyone. For example, some of my classmates are not from wealthy families, but they purchase the newest and the most popular garments for enormous prices to make an impression that they own huge funds. Thus, some people fake their abundance by wasting plenty of money on useless and expensive items.
Secondly, many people hate doing the same actions from day to day and they need to diversify their life style. They are inclined to opine that a routine is boring and if one has not tried almost all in their lives, the latter is believed to be senseless. In addition to that, one firstly sees how a person looks like and in order to be vividly memorized many people wear crazy and gorgeous outfits
For example, my neighbor who creates strange garden designs and dresses in clothes that do not suit one another, wants to acquire an attention to himself, but instead of it the feeling of repulsion appears. Hence, some individuals want something different to achieve certain level of attention and recognition.
To sum up, I agree to the statement mentioned above in my essay because some people act differently and want something unique to be not like the other people. The other reason is that people compete with each other based on aspiration after wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85074626866 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.490894087 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4101969364 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.071428571 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272976231816 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911883125278 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374431060043 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142475758136 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476342100268 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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