Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Since the beginning of civilization people have been searching for the opportunity of the life improvement. An opinion exists that humans are not content with things which they can afford and wish to receive more and more goods. I completely agree with the above mentioned statement due to the reasons marked hereinafter
Firstly, most people would like to OBTAIN AS MANY benefits AS POSSIBLE FOR humans' life is extremely short and this fact dominates in all of us. People are considered that they will not become happy until they receive something new and beneficial. 3. Furthermore, humanity start searching plenty of ways how to borrow crucial belongings, as they are cautious about their status. 4. For example, according to the "Rosstat" web-site 90% of people say that they want to receive more products every year.5. In other words, humans will not be pleased as they desire to own more.
Secondly, society is bored as a plenty of similar events or numerous things are duplicated and used frequently. When humans face the problem of the monotony, they start to avoid it consciously, searching for solutions in new benefits and things. Furthermore, people, who are considered that new tools or location can satisfy all the needs are not aware of the fact that the main problem is repetition of certain events. For example, a Russian well-known cartoon, named "Golden Antelope'' illustrates a villain, who dies from the weight of gold he was so anxious to receive more. Hence, people feel bored as they cannot find a way of enjoying things which they have already had.
In conclusion I would like to say that it is crucial to appreciate what is already there. Mankind should not be afraid of a skimpy life habitat and ought not to be melancholy about repeating events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76000190965 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9151953052 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234153413182 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762703797478 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613260882954 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130978756302 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764500647415 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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