Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.

Do people behave differently when they wear different clothes. They maintain the disparate opinions on this. From my perspective, I agree that people behave differently when they wear different clothes inasmuch as the following reasons.

First, clothes determine the personality of the people. Myriad of people easily impress by wearing the types of clothes. For instance, I am a bachelor level student. When I wear the suit and talk with the professor, then all other new students think that I am a professor and they perform appropriately like that of the professor. On the other hand, the professor just wears a t-shirt and paint, then they do friendly behavior with the professor by thinking he is a friend. Actually, I am a student.

Second, different group or profession have the different dress, when they do not wear their dress, then people would be behaved differently. For instance, in a court, certainly, people call the lawyer who wears the black dress than wearing the others dresses. Likewise, a doctor with the white dress will be busier than not having the white dress.

Finally, the opponents say that dress is just the basic needs and that does not affect the personal achievement. However, the different types of dress affect the personal achievements and growth. For example, in an interview, when I was with the informal dress, simple shirt, not the tie and suit. Then the manager did not select the job even I had the good experience and certificate. He said that you were not concentrated in your own dress, then you cannot manage my company properly. At last, he appointed the person, who have the skills, as well as, having the habitat of wearing the good dress.

In conclusion, People behave differently according to the dress inasmuch as that dress determines the personality, the different group have the different clothes or dress and it can enhance the personal development.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, likewise, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05031446541 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71722133809 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4369369066 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5263157895 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353232541381 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119852885462 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1593604791 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236369724334 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163820539058 0.0645574589148 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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