Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
By and large , Clothes are generally designed for meeting various people’s purposes such as fashion, uniform and Sport wears etc. however, It has a great deal of impact to our lives because it is not only one of 4 necessary things for living, But it also influences our personalities and behaviors. The statement brings up the point which wearing this kind of things can possibly change people’s characteristic. I strongly agree with this statement for some reasons which I will explain in this essay.
Firstly, When people wear a certain garment for any occasions , They will definitely act the same way as the type of cloth because ,It can stimulate the sense of those people to behave like the kind of the clothes that have on and possibly increase one’s confidence and self-esteem which are one of the important human’s characteristic, due to the fact that people are always choosing the clothes which make them feel uncomfortable and embarrassing. So they will choose the one which is suitable and proper with them. I will bring my friend’s case for an example when she wants to go out with me,
She tends to take more than a half an hour to choose her cloth. She told me that there are several types of clothes in her house but It’s not all that she loves. She has to choose the one which can make her feel no worries and not being strange to others.
Secondly, It could change one’s personality for the time being as I have mentioned above the ones who wearing the cloth behave like the same as its type, but It has the greater effect to them as well. Like while people wearing a black suit in some crucial ceremonies. They have to be polite and formal just because they are influenced by the clothes and the atmosphere or people wearing a uniform which could be school, company etc. They also behave quite disciplined and formal.
Moreover, Not only does It affect an individual, But also other people It changes people’s attitudes toward you. If you wear a prim and proper suit, They will automatically think that you are formal and clean, On the other hand, If you wear a shabby shirt and old torn jean. They will think that you are the unkempt person. Therefore appearance is the first thing that people give a look.
To recapitulate, I reiterate the point which is cloth has much influence on our lives. Wearing the clothes has some effects to people like acting like the types of clothes, increasing their self-esteem or confidence and changing one’s personalities temporarily and also changing the other’s attitude toward you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, kind of, such as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84269662921 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72176682579 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.8361482007 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.421052632 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227154138417 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790955755479 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411269125032 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126044213759 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548553454268 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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