Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Should government spend more money on the basic needs or buying or developing the computer technology? This is one of the most contentious issue and people express disparate opinions. From my perspective, any government should purchase more money on computer technology inasmuch as the following reasons.
First, any computer technology expeditiously performs the works and the performance enhances or ameliorates our basic needs. For example, in my village, many people were worked to their lands to fulfill the basic needs, without the technology, involvements of myriad people are wasteful and the damages due to the weather phenomena. However, the installation of computer technology is become beneficial to predict the weather, then our village overcome that conundrum .
Second, computer technology is an expensive technology, a simple man cannot offer that technology due to the inadequacy of money. For instance, the basic need such as food, entertainment is the capable sources. People facilely watch the movies for the entertainment, grow the food in their lands and so on. But, they cannot spend the money to buy and learn the computer. It takes a lot of money and time. Hence, the government should spend more money on computer technology.
Third, people become cognizant by using the computer technology. By observing the information on the diverse culture and activities, they can develop the society. People mind can be malleable by using the computer technology. For instance, when an uneducated society’s people observed the videos about the social plan, social reform through the internet, then the people certainly changes and they want to become the educated which is an essential factor for that society. Without computer technology, reformation of a society is a grueling effort.
In conclusion, any government should spend more money on computer technology because it works expeditiously, it is expensive and people easily become cognizant by using this technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47765363128 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.906260438 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494413407821 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5899662051 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1363636364 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450750223981 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154812694019 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176551822635 0.0737576698707 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270750073666 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172411132067 0.0645574589148 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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