Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they aren't in health. Do you agree that health status influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Some people behave totally different sometimes in specific condition but people feels some kind of negative impression, sometimes they act different for reason but sometimes different behavior came from health condition. Therefore, I agree that health status influence the way people behave. Imagine a quit person with shot gun seeking for help in emergency room. He or she will act totally different because of the health issue. I have some reason why I agree with it.
First of all, during life time, we experience plenty of different pain including fatigue, headache, stomachache itchiness and diarrhea et cetera. Those pains are hard to imagine that is happening in our body because if they pain is relatively high, it is hard to control ourselves. As long as we experiences that somehow, there are some kind of behavior sudden change occurs. Therefore, I would agree that health status influences the way people behave. I have two basic reason why it really does change the way people communicate and talk with each other.
First of all, pain connect to our nerves in brain so that if anyone felt pain, the brain will automatically do something to fight with viruses or bacteria that entered our body that ills us. Due to this process, headache, stomachache or fatigue occurred. Of course, while your body fighting with disease, individual will feel abnormal. For instance, when I was giving birth to my daughter, every part of my body felt pain and I had totally lost my control. During labor, I did not even know that I screamed and bite my hand so hard.
Secondly, after the unbearable pain, our body felt tired and lost the strengths. For this reason, even crazy person cannot talk load because of the health condition. When I was child, I remember that my aunt was sick in bed and could not even say a single word. After few weeks, she appreciates everyone who helped her. As I remember she was harsh, angry women but her health issue changed her whole behavior.
Last but not least, in an extreme pain to staying in bed condition, people behave differently because of health issue that occurred in their body. So that, I would agree that people change the way behave when they have any health condition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'experience'
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85789473684 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47538994941 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523684210526 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9711848484 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9090909091 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27005348967 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843874564486 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105915219693 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16376065659 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108283222203 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.