Wearning different clothes for diffrent occassion is important. Because that particular type of cloth represent significance of occasion or proffesional responsibility. Some people thinks that clothes influence the way people behave while some people doesn't think so. I think that individual behaviour is not at all dependent on the type of clothes.
Sometimes people need to wear particular dress to represent particular group. If all members of group wear same dress then everyones behaviour should be similar but this doesn't happen.For example, students wear uniform to represent that they belong to same school. So if all students wear same uniform then they should have been behave in similar way but this didn't happen. Every student is different from other in their social behaviour. Some school students are shy while some students are arroagant and so on. So, if similar clothes didn't help to have everyone to baheve in similar way that means that clothes didn't have influence on individual behaviour.
People behaviour is mostly depend on their proffession and their personal relationship with others. Individuals clothes get changed with time while the human behviour remains same with other person. For example, when I was in engineering college, I had a friend Sam. He was very nice to me and always helpful to others. While working in differnt committees in school due to his nice nature got the opportunity to work in Admin department. Due to code of dress he had to wear foramls while he was working in Admin. His uniform were changed but he was the same person to everyone he used to be. So its' clothes that get change with time not human behaviour.
In sum, diffrent cothes didn't influence the way people behaviour. Because person's choice of cothes is depend on his preofession and need of occasion. Clothes only gives the external appearance of the person. Human behaviour is much more differnt the his clothes. Anyone can not predict the humans behaviour from the exteral appearance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12158054711 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65317684715 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471124620061 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8706674635 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2608695652 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3043478261 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172025354505 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516564728525 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502114638928 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113779024996 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573408948395 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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