Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this advanced and highly developed era people are constantly looking for a way to run away from the hustle and bustle of the city and the pressures of their life and what is better than a trip even a brief one. Annually tourism and travelers help the countries with indespensable and inevitable flow of money from both inside and outside of the country.
Domestic trips have some superiorities and advantages like they save us the energy, money and the time that we mostly spend for paper works like visa permission which is occasionally fruitless. For instance, this summer my family and I sent a visa request regarding Canada but unfortunatly after a trip we had to another country in order to give our biometrics it was rejected and all of that stress was literally for nothing.
In all educational systems we have learned about our own country but when it comes to other countries we don’t have much to say. Learning about the different culturs of people like their foods, varieties of histories, their predominant both classic and modern art styles and knowing about their ways of developing their country and managing their economy can inspire travelers on their own lives and also broaden our horizons. Trips out of country though, expensive can accommodate language learners with conditions and situations to test themselves and boost up their fluency. Trying someplace rather than our own country is an awsomn experience in which an indivitual if travelling alone can come to strugle with different issues and possible troubles that is going to make a perfect memory and attribute comparing one’s imagination from living abroad as an international student and studing in home country.
Lucrative business of tourism and financial reasons has made countries try harder to advertise and attract tourists from outside of the country meanwhile it exactly otherwise about the native people. However, people deciding about a trip to whether it should be a domestic one or a foreign country is exceedingly depends on the conditions and the circumstances of the indivituals. Varieties if economical states and the financial circumstances make people to choose different destinations for their travels. For instance, people from countries with low value of money and low incomes frequently can not afford to go abroad. Consequently, I believe making a decision about the destination is more about the ability and affordabilty more than the benefit from trip.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, regarding, so, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17705735661 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83683565257 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561097256858 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0449093833 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.692307692 100.406767564 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8461538462 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254931995207 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919709054962 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471841868997 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149734041131 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740457026661 0.0645574589148 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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