I uttterly agree with the concept that leadership is an inner instinct and one in order to be one should be bornt with one. The superior reasons why I believe this way are the consolidated personality types, the aptitutes and the abilites of an individual as well as the requirement of the background.
First I think that, psychologicaly people should have specific and explicit features on their personlaity types in order to make an adequate and successful leader. It is virtually imposible to change ones' brain function and the way of one thinks and acts uncounciosly. Therefore, adjectives like intelligence, perseverance, reliability and the ability of handling highpressures and still being able to make rational and logical decisions are not some things that can be thought to one.
Furthermore, the attitude people take toward issues and others around the are foundmental for seprating a good leader from others. These attitudes are possible to change by long term efforts and education but at the end our dominant behaviours are going to be the ones in our neatures. In times of diffeculties and trouble it is going to be our real selves that would manifast. Some people born responsible and caring about others and on the other hand it is impossible to make some to be ontime for their jobs or stay overtime in order to meet the deadlines of due time of a drastically important project.
At last in order for someone to be a leader people should follow him/her in first place or there is no one to lead. Our backgrounds and our past always run backinto our faces and it is impossible to avoid them. The future is unknown for us but it is the past that everyone look into. As a result even if someone changes by time passing by and grows a leader from it self, it will be our past that people judge us with. Therefore it is not likely that people would follow someone who had not shown any prosperity in the leadership before.
In conclusion, the concept of leadership is a very complicated and it is dramatically life-cahnging in a society. Therefore, choosing and following one is one of the most sensible decisions that people make and I have strong reasons that even a slight chance of failour because of the different true personality that person is showing should be avoided. The intrinsic attitudes and the rich backgrounds of an indivudual are other aspects that should be considered before entitling one as a leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8119047619 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85279331625 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3137214272 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.882352941 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7058823529 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192718367032 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646112936183 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561263778307 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121047384153 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461041669302 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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